Why your newsletter sucks: How to grab me by the eyeballs

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Hi everybody, headline goes here please

Hi everybody, headline goes here please (Photo credit: reinvented)

Marketing’s hard work.

To make it pay off, you need to make it worth paying attention to.

Take your email newsletter, for instance.

If I get another email called “XYZ Newsletter: February 2012″ I think I’ll scream.

Or, likely just hit unsubscribe.

Point is, if you want me to read your emails, you’ve gotta grab me by the eyeballs.

Compare the headline below to the one above:

Rick, is this what you’re looking for?

See what I did there?

Using my favorite word (my name, natch), I got my attention.

Then, I asked a question that shows I care about what matters to me. And one that’s just begging for an answer, which I’m sure I’ll learn if I open the email.

Of course, this is just an example. The right headline to use will depend on the subject, what your audience cares about, and what you want them to do.

And it should come in your own voice.

An “e-newsletter” doesn’t have to be all stiff and formal and official. It can just be a conversation between people. You’re trying to build a relationship here.

And please remember that your marketing isn’t set in stone. It’s a laboratory. Test and measure and you’ll begin to see what people respond to.

In an upcoming email, I’ll show you how to do that. It’s easy.

For now, check out Copyblogger’s reference on writing irresistible email headlines.

And tell me: What compelling headline has come into your inbox lately that grabbed you by the peepers (and got you to open the email)?



  • Headliner

    Uh, Rick? Your model headline stinks of spam. Or were you being ironic?

  • Anonymous

    So, umm, the “Weekly Hypenotic Round Up” email in my inbox this morning had the subject line of just “Latest News for 02/11/2012.”

    Guess I should unsubscribe?

  • Hmmm…

    I’ve gotta agree with Headliner. The underlying message of this post is certainly valid. But if Hypenotic started sending me emails with the subject line “Hey , read this!”, they wouldn’t survive my delete button if they managed to stay out of my spam filter. 

  • Rick Stender

    Hmmm…/Headliner: I agree that headline would seem spammy if it were, in fact, spam. One of my points was that, if you are developing a relationship with your list, you can be conversational and provocative.

    I was going to say that I find it very unlikely anyone would unsubscribe from a newsletter that gives them real value on the basis of one headline. But of course, stranger things have happened.

    eatingrules: Live by the sword, I guess! Though, we’d sure hate to lose you. 

    We’ve been talking internally about updating our approach. Maybe your calling bullshit will help us get the ball rolling. 

  • Anonymous

    Then again, I opened the email…  :)